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Ikki




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PostSubject: Konayuki, hey.   Konayuki, hey. I_icon_minitimeFri Feb 27, 2009 2:36 am

Well, this song inspired me to write this, THIS IS NOT A DIRECT TRANSLATION. I wrote this myself. Konayuki, hey. 505375 While spamming the song into my brain Konayuki, hey. 392515 This song was meant to written for actually someone, not telling Konayuki, hey. 871826

Anyways enjoy. I'll post a link to the song that inspired me to write this. Sad poem btw. Lulz, yes I am emo. Konayuki, hey. 518980

Konayuki or "________"

Walking down the streets of loneliness,
I feel the breeze that you do too,
I look up and stare at the same blue sky,

I don’t know who “me” really is,
Without you,
I feel the pain in my ever bleeding heart.

Give me your hands that were neglected,
I shall make them ever once warm,
Holding on to them, never letting go, ever,
Why do I feel this way?

I can’t bear the ever burning pain,
Why are we not together?
We were meant for each other,
I need you, forever and always,
Please do not forget, I love you.

________, hey, don’t walk away from me,
Because, I need you, oh, we were meant to be together,
Please don’t let go,
I love you.

As rain dropped from the ever blue sky,
I remembered the love we shared,
But a wall blocks us,
From each other.

Whatever I do I cannot break down the wall,
Distancing between us,
Keeping us apart, I feel the cold,
Forever, I will never forget you,
I feel my ever bleeding heart.

________, hey, please come back into my arms,
I want to feel your warmth,
Whatever the world brings, to break us,
I will always love you.

________…., hey, I’m sorry bout this,
The pain isn’t going away,

The pain inside is bleeding, eternally,
Please I need you,
Oh whoa,

________, hey,
There’s a wall between us,
Can you feel the warmth of my body?

I’m sorry that I couldn’t break the wall,
Please forgive me,
________.


Link to song : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_DayRtlDtfg

Btw, I kinda really wanna know what you guys think of my writing, really haven't gotten any improving feedback. Please leave a comment or a feedback~ ღ Konayuki, hey. 1866
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PostSubject: Re: Konayuki, hey.   Konayuki, hey. I_icon_minitimeFri Feb 27, 2009 2:56 am

I'm tired and don't feel like reading atm, but I'm sure it's lovely. ~_~ So I'm leaving a comment as requested. >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Konayuki, hey.   Konayuki, hey. I_icon_minitimeFri Feb 27, 2009 4:50 am

*Copied daughter* Konayuki, hey. 272626
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PostSubject: Re: Konayuki, hey.   Konayuki, hey. I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 28, 2009 8:29 am

AWW! OREO! Konayuki, hey. 736863
That's awesome.
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